This is my fiancee's brother's girlfriend (convoluted much?). She's been wanting me to do some portraits for quite a while but busy schedules and crappy weather haven't helped. She called me one morning (the weather was supposed to be rainy but turned out to be awesome), asking if we could do them that day. I had prior engagements to help another photographer with a shoot that afternoon, but I agreed to do these quickly. On top of that, it was around noon, so the lighting was really harsh. I certainly see things I'd like to change and do differently, but would appreciate some C&C on them rather than the back-patting I get from friends and family :greenpbl: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5.