Studio Shoot 12 June 2004 - *Not work safe*

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  1. Bobman

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    Wow! I think your lighting here is fabulous. Nice positioning, too. My one nitpick is that I wish the model had turned her face towards the camera just a little more, so we could see more of the far eye.

    Very nice, though! :)
     
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    I dont want this to sound like anything more than artistic. She needs to loose the bra. I think it would be a better shot with out it. Its distracting.

    Or atleast get one thats the same material as that gold material or something. The white bra is killin it.

    I agree, a little more far eye would help. And maybe show the top part of her head.
     
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    I would think her breasts hanging out and visible would me more distracting. And I'm a girl and couldn't care less about breasts and I would still think it's discrating from the face which I think is the most imprtant thing in any photo.
     
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    Hrmm... I agree with graig. From this angle the nipple would barely be visible or not at all. I don't think it would distract at all. The white bra is far more distracting than a breast would be.
     
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    Well for one they wouldnt be hanging out and visible. You may be able to see nipple but not much if you could. It simplifies the image. Skin & the blue & gold thing shes wearing. Thats why models never wear bras when they are on the walk way.

    Also, it depends if your able to look at the photograph artisticaly. Form and figure is art.
     
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    This critique is making me laugh....the things you boys focus in on.... :wink: I felt the white band of the bra went along well with the bold geometric design of the blouse, and it didn't bother me at all. If she'd been at such an angle to see the white straps, that might detract from the image, but you can't. I appreciate what you're seening, but the band of white bothers me as little as the strong bands of gold and lines of blue. It's a very striking effect.
     
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    no no no, its like wearing blue striped boxers under my white leisure suit pants, its just distracting. :D
     
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    um....I must agree, that would be totally distracting....you'd ruin a perfectly nice pair of boxers with a pair of white leisure suit pants.....? :shock:

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    Gregdavis....u notti notti....ask u to comment on the lighting, u want to remove bra :oops: :lol: anyway, ur wish is my command....

    ok guys, here u are, different model, about the same style....

    did it on lford panf 50, developed in ddx 8 mins 20 C......no ps

    please comment.....thank you.

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    If I may.. I don't like that you've cropped out her eyes. If you had done the cropping just above the mouth, that would be one thing. But, to leave the nose & chop the eyes... I wanna see those peepers! Other than that, very well done.
     
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    I share "ShootingYou's" opinion about her eyes. I much regret that we don't get to see them and it would not "hurt" as much if her nose had gone, too. Then cropping her face would look like an element of style. Now it looks like a dreadful mistake.
     

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