Studio shoot C&C Please!

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  1. Ozzmosis

    Ozzmosis TPF Noob!

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    Hello!
    bought a rose for my wife and decided to play a little in the studio. C&C Please!

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    I'd probably soften up or remove that highlight/glint in her right eye, its a bit distracting. Her eyes are already nice with defined iris, and a glassy look...so the highlight twinkle is a little too much. Maybe a little more light on her lower right cheek too.

    Second one looks good. Im curious what it would look like if it wasnt centered.
     
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    i really enjoy the second photo
    very pretty and the selective colouring is very effective
     
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    I like the pics but am wondering if there is a way to soften her face more? it seems like her skin catches my eyes more/first than anything else.
     
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    Yeah that highlight is poor. I will remove both. Looked worse before as i was standing in front of the softbox a little...

    My wife wanted the selective color. She has a great eye, and we make a good team when shooting portraits. :)

    Her skin has really big pores. I should spend more time smoothing the first photo. That was the first thing she commented on after taking the photos, hehe!

    Thanks for the input as always!
     
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    the second photo of b/w is nice with the flower popping with color, good job on that
     

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