Studio Shoot

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  1. Bobman

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    Wow. I like her pose, and a "wind" in her hair. But I don't like the light on her face,. If I were you, I'd get rid of all shadows on her face and pay more attention to eyes
     
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    Ditto to Mentos. The pose and hair are great. I think some lightening around her eyes would give the picture a little more spark.
     
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    I agree about the light on the face. Where are the white dots in her eyes that we talked about ;) You need to get more even lighting. Unless she was in a black shirt with a black BG then the lightning might work better. but you still need those white dots so the eyes have life in them.

    everything esle is awesome. the pose and her hair being blown are great together.
     

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