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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by darin3200, Feb 26, 2006.

  1. darin3200

    darin3200 TPF Noob!

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    The fast-food place, not the transit system :)

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  2. JonK

    JonK I want MORE!!

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    well....i do love the grainy BW of your film shots and I like the POV in this shot..but for me there would be more interest had you included the man more instead of the reflection of the fluorescent light and the styro bowls.
    The human interest would just grab me more than what you've captured here.
    keep at it :D
     
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    thanks JonK. I really appreciate the critique. Some of the problem is I need to work on my shooting from the hip style. After looking at the neg again it turns out I actually have a lot more of his head but I chopped it off in printing. I'll reprint and post the results.
     

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