sudden inspiration

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by asila, Nov 21, 2009.

  1. asila

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    Looks as though you photocopied two pictures.
     
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    ???can u be more specific??? I am still new to photograph so my skill is still not good :D
    What wrong with those two?please answer to help me improve :p
     
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    I like them, For the second image; I would have put one of the other triangle objects in focus as opposed to just the snippet of one in focus, but to each his own.
     
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    I love the second image. I agree with averageJoe, I would have maybe focused on the third triangle (are those tire spikes?). Also, keep in mind that I'm a very new to photography, just my $0.02
     
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    Nice photos. Too much contrast for my tastes though.
     
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    I like them both. Wouldnt change the contrast personally, but I prefer more contrast. I am curious what difference having the second shot focused on the third spike would add....but I like it as is, might be better on the 3rd..don't know.
     

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