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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by gendarmee, Mar 21, 2008.

  1. gendarmee

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    Edited: pics don't exist on the server anymore.
     
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    I'd crop somewhere between these two. Tighter than the first one, but not as tight as the second one. The second one lacks a tiny bit of space around the child, but that's just a newb's opinion :)
     
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    I have to say I like the second one more, I'm not sure why, it just seems more interesting..
     
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    And I don't know if it's just me being a noob, but I notice two things in the second one that I don't gravitate toward in the first: the red thing in his hand, and the motion of his right foot. Also, I'm not sure I'd look at the wire as a problem. In the first one, the environment seems to dominate my thoughts more. I like it a lot.
     
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    Nope, not you being just a noob, I noticed it too. I didn't really like the motion on the foot but that's unavoidable, but I think the second one makes for a more interesting picture.
     
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    I like the 2nd one more also. Too bad about the wire, though. But still a very nice shot! As for a title, I have no idea! How about "A Gentleman out for an evening stroll" :)
     
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    I Like A bit more than B, Just for the reason that it puts his size in perspective. I agree with Drake though. Somewhere right in between this might be a bit better. Either way its an awesome shot.

    As for a title .. uh.. maybe "Sunset Stroll"

    (i guess I'd be considered a noob 2)
     
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    You nailed it! Great shot.
     
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    Last crop is the best!

    Just as a note, he is a little bit soft... might want to fix that next time around.
     

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