Summer days....

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Southerngal, Jun 12, 2007.

  1. Southerngal

    Southerngal TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 8, 2007
    Messages:
    299
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Georgia
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    [​IMG][​IMG]
     
  2. blackdoglab

    blackdoglab yeah I'm easy.... but I'm not cheap

    Joined:
    Jun 26, 2006
    Messages:
    1,057
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    in my darkroom
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    nice shots. The depth of field and the composition on the first shot are wonderful. Try bringing down the highlights on the second shot.
     
  3. Remi M.

    Remi M. TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 25, 2006
    Messages:
    279
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Vancouver, Canada
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Nice shots. I like the scene and the timing of your shots.
    I would compose a little differently. In both shots I would place the subjects just a little to the right.

    btw I think you have a bit of dust spot in the second shot. I would clone it out if you have photoshop.
     
  4. Southerngal

    Southerngal TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 8, 2007
    Messages:
    299
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Georgia
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit

    Thanks. I hadn't noticed the dust. I used the healing brush to correct it.
    [​IMG]
     
  5. sage95

    sage95 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 22, 2007
    Messages:
    45
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Idaho Falls
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I agree with having the subject a little more to the right but only on the 2nd one. The first one I love it. I think they are both really nice shots
     

Share This Page