Discussion in 'General Critical Analysis' started by midnitejam, Aug 17, 2007.
Comments and suggestions, please
55 mm FL
not badly exposed but there is nothing of particular interest to draw the eye,
pretty even band of grasses in foreground, water in middle and far bank at the top/
Nothing in the composition leads the eye anywhere; it just all sits there.
I love the colours but feel that composition could lead the eye better and there is too much grassy foreground. Maybe you could get a shot going up the lake......
Thanks, everyone, for the comments. BTW, I was just wondering if you noticed the little kid fishing at the pond's edge?
You can't see the kids until you mention it.
Photoshop and a great crop would help this one, but as it is, it's pretty, but not effective.
Try the crop.
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