Summer Evenings On the Farm

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  1. midnitejam

    midnitejam TPF Noob!

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    Comments and suggestions, please

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    not badly exposed but there is nothing of particular interest to draw the eye,
    pretty even band of grasses in foreground, water in middle and far bank at the top/

    Nothing in the composition leads the eye anywhere; it just all sits there.
    Sorry.
     
  3. Kanikula

    Kanikula TPF Noob!

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    I love the colours but feel that composition could lead the eye better and there is too much grassy foreground. Maybe you could get a shot going up the lake......
     
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    Thanks, everyone, for the comments. BTW, I was just wondering if you noticed the little kid fishing at the pond's edge?
     
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    You can't see the kids until you mention it.
    Photoshop and a great crop would help this one, but as it is, it's pretty, but not effective.
    Try the crop.
     

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