Sunday on Campus :: Black and White Edition

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by NoK, Oct 21, 2007.

  1. NoK

    NoK TPF Noob!

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    Please critique me guys, I need to improve. Thanks!

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    All taken on the campus of the University of Kansas.

    GO HAWKS!
     
  2. doobs

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    Very nice! I'd suggest straightening up the first two, but I like the whole set a lot! Good work!
     
  3. NoK

    NoK TPF Noob!

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    Yea, I wish I could. No photoshop at the moment... :(
     
  4. nealjpage

    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    Wait. Ron Paul supporters in Lawrence?!? I wouldn't have figured that...

    Otherwise not too bad.
     
  5. Stan (AG)

    Stan (AG) TPF Noob!

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    You shouldn't do anything to the first one; it's good use of Dutch tilt. However, for the second one, the DOF is kind of awkward, being prominent in the mid-ground. Still, great job overall! These batch give off a hint of photojournalism. Keep it up.
     
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    I like your shots well done!
     

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