Sunrise on the Olympic Riviera

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  1. Lyanna

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    Comments are muchly appreciated :)
     
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    nice, i like the umbrella? silhouettes but they do look a bit cluttered because of the smaller ones at the front
     
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    I like where you placed the horizon. Beautiful sky! Great job.
     
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    For some reason, I'm only getting the red x. :( Pasting the url into the address bar didn't work either:(:(
     
  5. Lyanna

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    Shutterbug..are you sure? It works fine for me, it's on my own domain which is up too...weird!

    Chips...you have a point :p Maybe I should try to clone them out. It's indeed umbrella's, but folded yet since it was very early.
     
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    wel maybe im jus being picky - jealous of such a good shot! :D
     
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    I like the composition. I'm wondering if we might see a little "punch" in the clouds/lightrays with a little addition of contrast or curves adjustment...Overall, very nice photo.
     
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    Thanks! I already did a little alteration with curves etc in PS, was afraid to do more...I didn't want it to look too postprocessed.
     
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    Very good shot. I wonder if it would have a greater affect if all the umbrella's were tied the same with only one umbrella open....ah well who knows? great shot as it is.
     

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