Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Lyanna, Aug 5, 2004.
Comments are muchly appreciated
nice, i like the umbrella? silhouettes but they do look a bit cluttered because of the smaller ones at the front
I like where you placed the horizon. Beautiful sky! Great job.
For some reason, I'm only getting the red x. Pasting the url into the address bar didn't work either
Shutterbug..are you sure? It works fine for me, it's on my own domain which is up too...weird!
Chips...you have a point Maybe I should try to clone them out. It's indeed umbrella's, but folded yet since it was very early.
wel maybe im jus being picky - jealous of such a good shot!
I like the composition. I'm wondering if we might see a little "punch" in the clouds/lightrays with a little addition of contrast or curves adjustment...Overall, very nice photo.
Thanks! I already did a little alteration with curves etc in PS, was afraid to do more...I didn't want it to look too postprocessed.
Very good shot. I wonder if it would have a greater affect if all the umbrella's were tied the same with only one umbrella open....ah well who knows? great shot as it is.
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