sunrise

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  1. messier

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    i'd like these a lot more if the sun werent so blown out.
    the second one is the best here.
    and in the first one, the dock on the left is a bit distracting.
    but okay job.
    t.r.
     
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    wow :heart: I love sunrise pictures! :thumbup:
     
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    I would have to say the first one. The island and sun are centered well and the foreground and dock give the photo a nice compesition compared with the others. My only thing is the foreground is lacking detail or if you where going for it being dark maybe bump some of the saturation levels up in the sky and water.

    The second photo is lacking a subject for me and the sun rather turns into a spot. There are no clouds are ground to create anything more than this and the island is kind of wieghing down the one side.

    The third isn't bad but i feel is lacking the symmetry created in the first one.
     

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