Sunset First

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by DaveWrong, Dec 8, 2008.

  1. DaveWrong

    DaveWrong TPF Noob!

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    Took these on my d60 last night, let me know what you think please.
    Sorry Arch Mate - could not pick you up, car full of visitors:grumpy:;)

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  2. Arch

    Arch Damn You! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    wahhh you should have ditched the visitors!... lol only joking mate, plenty more opportunities to go out ;)

    You did well here too, you got some nice compositions going, good job with that. I prefer the exposure of the fist, but you did make good use of the cloud reflections in the others.

    Im sure you've done minimal (if any) processing, so as far as 'out of the camera' goes your defo on the right track dude. :thumbup:
     
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    the fitst one looks very nice. i really wish you woulda had a longer exposure though so the water would look perfectly smooth.
     
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    I like all three...

    For the first one, I really like the overall look, though the black objects to the left of the scene (I'm guessing some surfers maybe?) are a bit distracting... mainly because you can't quite make them out, so I just keep trying to figure out exactly what they are. If I were you, I'd crop them out...maybe even a vertical composition...
     
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    Thank you kind people, would certainly agree with the cropping comment.

    Arch...Oh yes there will be plenty of time for more ;)
     
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    i thought they were a little underexposed.. but obviously that is just me
     

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