Sunset from Battery Park

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  1. Preston

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    Took this last week in NYC from Battery Park.

    Any suggestions are greatly appreciated.

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    Wow. Very nice. I love the transition from orange to blue. The blue/purple river is really nice too. I don't think there's anything I could do better. The color seems a bit overblown/overexposed or something around the sun; especially in the yellow right around it where it seems to make a harsh transition, but I'm just getting picky. Overall very nice.
     
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    i love the colors, nice shot!
     
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    I love the blending of the color in this pic. The silhouette of the statue of liberty and the surroundings is awsome. I would maybe crop a little off the top so the pic is a little more balanced.
     
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    teh sun is pretty bright. id rather jam a carrot up my urethera than look at a sun that bright. but other than that teh picture is pretty schweet for a n00b.
     
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    Really pretty. You guys are inspiring me to take a whack at some sunsets. If I don't take any good photos, at least I've seen something this beautiful.
     
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    One of the better sunsets. You did good
     
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    Nice colors, but where are the huddled masses? I wonder if trees ever disrupted the skyline like that beautiful smokestack.
     
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    *shudders* :shaking:
    Thanks for putting that image in my head. Ouch. It hurts to think of it. Ouch!
    It's really not that bad.
     
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    I think this photo is good, perhaps needing only a little trimming off the top to give it a better sence of balance, as uberben said. What great strong colours :shock:
     

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