Sunset Over Old Mission

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    CreAting iMagERy Art TPF Noob!

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    Captured a sunset over Old Mission, MI the weather could not have been more perfect. C&C is appreciated.

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    They look a bit out of focus... or might be camera shake... or both.

    Also horizon is tilted, you may want to fix that.

    Not overly interesting shots, but pretty colors.

    Where's the mission???
     
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    Thanks for the critique, Old Mission is about 30 min north of Traverse City on the little peninsula above it. I didn't have much time to get these since spur of the moment thing, also no tripod(would have helped). I thought they did look a little slanted, I'll Try to fix that.
     
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    With all due respect, I disagree with manaheim. I really don't see any significant out-of-focusness, well maybe a tiny tiny tiny bit in the first photo. And the horizon is barely slanted at all, you can barely tell that it is slanted. It's nothing that will ruin the picture at all. I find this picture interesting, along with any other sunset picture. These are some great pictures, good job. :)
     
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    Very nice. I have to go with #1 as my favorite of the two.

    I gotta know, what was in the water? Look almost dead center of both. There is something in the second one that isn't there in the first. (Jet ski maybe?) :er:
     
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    I think it is a segull on a rock, if I am not mistaken.

    Thanks for the comments.
     

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