Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by themonko, Jan 15, 2005.
Any ways to improve? Thanks!
very nice. I like the layers of colors from top to bottom and the color in the light house...
maybe center the tower
I like the tower where it is. Some of the color would be lost if you moved the tower to the center and the color is what is accented by the black shiloute of the tower. I would keep it as is.
messier - I noticed the tower was off centered and decided to leave it...like Vmann said.
Vmann and elsaspet - I appreciate the comments, THANK YOU!
I think it just need sto be less perfect
SQ Bimmer - Thank you! I can try messing something up...
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