Surf+Birds

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  1. sublimelbc

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    #1 is awesome. I love how you captured the birds in a circular formation. The only thing I would do, is to go into ps and take out the boat on the horizon - I find it distracting.

    #2 - I really don't like the blurry grass in the middle of the frame. It seems unintentional.
     
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    thanks for the input.

    I took the boat out and added a bit of color to the sky. Not to sure about the color though.

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    Good catch but horizon in #1 is needlessly off level.
     
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    Wow it looks awesome with the boat gone.:thumbup: :thumbup:
     
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    My eyes were so drawn to the formation of the birds that I didn't notice... hmm - still a sweet pic though.
     
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    ok. No ship and straightened horizon.

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