Surf Photos - Revision #1

Discussion in 'Photojournalism & Sports Gallery' started by mschoelen, Sep 20, 2008.

  1. mschoelen

    mschoelen TPF Noob!

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    Yes, good or bad I want some C&C Thanks. I basically just want to know if I am on the right track with my cropping, but other C&C outside of that is definitely welcomed. Not too long ago I posted a few of these originals, and the main thing talked about that needed improving was framing. A lot of people talked about cropping in closer also, so I gave my shot at this. I did have a problem with some of them being very fuzzy, because I had cropped in so close, and the lens I was using was a cheapy. And sorry for the mismatched sizes, and watermarks. If you so wish you can re-edit the image and show me what you would have done.


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    3.A - I actually wanted to leave the left and right side of the wave, but thought he might be in the middle too much.
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    4.A - Came out very blurry that close
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    5.A - Another close blurry crop
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    7.A - Didn't really know how to crop this one, just took a little off the bottom.
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    Thanks again. :cheers:
     
  2. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Dislike the crops of 1a, 4a, & 5a way to IMO tight

    2a is little tight the right side, would like to see more of the spray

    3b like as is

    6a My fav of the group, IMO need right side cut off haft way between the board and current right edge

    7a good crop, but Sorry I do not like the shot

    8a works well
     

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