Swimming Pool Store

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  1. Don Schaeffer

    Don Schaeffer TPF Noob!

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  2. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Some info about the shot would be helpful if you'd like critique, please. Refer to the forum guidelines sticky if you're not sure what to supply with your image. Thanks! :)
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    hmm I don't understand this shot. I don't know what is hidden behind the picture and why you took it. It lack subject for me. For example if there was a kid on a slide, and the different interesting light...
     
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    Reminiscent of the color work of Winogrand. Simple composition of classic Americana. With some subtle humor thrown in (intended or not...) in that it appears the slide will eject it's rider off the building.

    Well seen.

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  5. Don Schaeffer

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    Thanks guys. You have been most generous with your comments. This is a store not a swimming pool. It's a company that sells pools. I just liked the abstract look--the flow of the image across the frame.


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