Symmetry is neat

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  1. Shane

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    2 flashes. Little under and grainy. qritique the hell out of it please.
     
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    Actually, I love the grain and darkness of this. The pipe or whatever on top of the building is a little distracting. Other than that, it's awesome!
     
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    Yeah, same for me. The pipe on the top of the building really wants me to stare at it.
     
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    How about?...hope you don't mind :p


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    Edit: i got rid of distortion, added some vignetting( i'm not really sure i like thought it gives more importance to the subject ) , and saturated the colours :p
     
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    The croped version is much better.
     
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    Nicely captured Shane. Im diggin the croped version too. I find that stack in the first image keeps drawing my eye there. Cool stuff.
     
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    did you crop that at all? if not that really is nearly perfect framing
     
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    I reedited it myself and this is what i got, im torn between the small crop that was done and this one. Thanks a bunch
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    and yes i did crop it a tiiiny bit cause i was off by the slightest bit.
     
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    Great pic shane, I prefer the crop as well as I am distracted by the stack. I also like the extra vignetting.
     
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    I like the first one. The curve on the roof and the colors of the sky deserve keeping the pipe there IMO. It gives me a better idea of "industrial" together with the doors and the ground... Nice shot :wink:
     
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    i find the exposure just perfect, personaly what i like to see in skate shots is the move from up close, if you wish to crop this pic, i would crop it a little from the bottom, not the top
     

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