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  1. blatalllic

    blatalllic TPF Noob!

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    This was my first time shooting with my own home studio....Tips, critiques are always welcomed as Im here to improve my photography!!! Thanks guys/gals!!!!

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    I like them you did a great job.
     
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    I like one and two the best, the last one looks like the background was photoshopped so it just kind gives the whole image a weird look...could just be me.

    On the first one her face seems to be a bit blown out...not sure if you were going for that effect.

    All and all great shots.
     
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    What's going on with the halos? Are you extracting?
     
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    not bad, but #3 looks like you cut her out in PS and put her on a background. It just doesn't look right.
     
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    Not to hijack, but what do you mean? I'm a newbie, so I don't see anything other than the background issue in the third. And I can't speak for everyone else, but maybe some of us can learn something (I know I will).

    The second is my favorite. Its very sexy with the laces on the shirt. And how she's looking out the window is intriguing. The lighting is good from what I can tell, and so is the composition.

    I'm sorry I'm not more help. You're really way beyond me. But maybe some critique from a more untrained eye will help you.
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nicely done; in addition to those already mentioned comments, I would suggest that overall they appear to be slightly over-exposed, and have rather too-strong highlights.
     
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    blatalllic TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for all the comments...this was my first attempt and yes the lighting came out a lil hard...I need to back the softbox back some more...Its a learning experiance...number three I did PS that one...Just wanted a different look.....

    what do you mean by hallos extracting?
     
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    Theres no cigarette in the first one....
     
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    #2 is my favorite. #1 is okay, but like MyaLover pointed out, no cigarette. Even if it were unlit, shoulda had one.
     
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    I am liking number 2 as well. For some reason I am bothered by the outdoor greenery, (and the watch..I think I might be getting a tad detail oversensitive) I would love to see it in a really contrasty B&W.

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