Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by tr0gd0o0r, Aug 9, 2004.
I dont know what you were going for on this one exactly
the whole picture seems very sad and depressing
I would also like to see the picture more in focus, on my monitor it seems soft
i don't get the title.
in itself, it doesn't seem very interesting, though the technical skill is there. maybe if it were part of a larger series or context.
i'm not quite liking the "horizon" in the background. maybe if it were slightly higher, or had a softer decay
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