Tennis Narrative Project - B/W

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  1. austriker

    austriker TPF Noob!

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    Well im in digital photo 1 and we had our first project assigned. we were assigned a narrative project. basically to tell a story in a 5 b/w 4x6 shots.. nothing to fancy.. i think mine turned out rather well. i know the idea is not that creative but i kind of put it together in one day.. what do you guys think? any suggestions maybe for the future?

    i did edit it in photoshop (i have been using iPhoto for the past few months to edit, discovered ps in the school library a few days before we were assigned the project) but not that much b/c i only have a few hours of experience using it....

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    thanks!
     
  2. ANDS!

    ANDS! No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Was the intention to not show his face?
     
  3. austriker

    austriker TPF Noob!

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    yes. i wanted the focus and subject to be on the racket itself and leave the person ambiguous.
     
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    All but the first and last of your photos are missing ... but I'm still trying to figure out who that is. It's not Roger - Wilson is his sponsor.

    (Nice lines of the racquet in that first shot, though. :) )
     
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    Hi there, this post is over a year old and thus I have since deleted the photos from flickr where they were hosted from. If you talking about the poster, yes it is Roger. The poster is wilson and the racket is prince.. irony eh
     

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