Testing out an idea ***maybe NWS??**

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  1. MyaLover

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    Testing out a new idea, and I can count on you guys to give me feedback. I dont feel they are my greatest, just a test to get others feelings

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    I really like the first one. A tad more light, and it'd be perfect. Very nice pose. Shows nothing, but alludes to much. Maybe try the same pose with a tad better exposure. I like that the shadows are hiding the bottom part though...very sexy.

    You do some amazing work as a photographer/model team of one.
     
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    Facial expression of two is...OK, Kind of sad and dejected look, almost as if locked in a small room, but the lighting obscures the eyes and the eyes are the deturmining factor in something like that.

    all of the poses look forced and uncomfortable.

    #3 is the one I like the best, though uncomfortable looking the pose is still interesting to me and that lighting is just very ideal in my oppinion.
     
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    Better?

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    Thank you :)
     
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    Yes, that is closer to what I'm saying. A different expression on your face perhaps would portray your message a tad better. Right now it's more "I know what you're thinking"...but I would want more of a "Hey...can you guess what I'm thinking?" look.

    That's the best explanation I can think of.
    Either way, not a large error...just something to think about.
     
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    #2 is the best!!!!! Your a hot woman Mya. :drool:

    I don't like the mouth open in #1. All good stuff here.
     
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    sorry!

    i think these are very unattractive.

    are all the above posts from males?
     
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    I only really like 2, but I tend to like more depressed / macabre looking photos.
     
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    Umm....am I supposed to lol or what?

    I can see if you think they're not good pics...but unattractive?
    Meh. I guess we all have our own thing.
     
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    why would you laugh?
     
  12. Alex_B

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    I think they suffer from the light ... not the pose.

    the last two have strong shadows cast downwards, which make your face look sad.
     

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