Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by midnitejam, Feb 23, 2006.
Does this composition work? C&C, Please.
While I like the idea, the photo looks a bit too sureal for my tastes. Prehapse without the pol filter quite so restricting? Unless sureal is what you were going for in which case it looks great
composition is generally good, but cut a little of the right hand side to center it.
It could definatly be centered a bit, but I love the shot, is it altered at all?it does seem surreal, also unfortunatly it is a bit out of focus, if you could go back to this same spot and get a better focus I think you would have something great on your hands.
I ran the pic through 'Neat Image' to eradicate some of the noise. I cropped it specificaly to get the white-cap on the left 1/3 vertical and to get that cloud close to being on the right 1/3 vertical in order to apply the 'rule-of-thirds' as closely as possible.
My delima was to choose a sharp and noisy image over a softer image with less noise.
Thanks for the comments.
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