The 72 St Pier

[midnitejam]

Does this composition work? C&C, Please.

300D Rebel
C. Polarizer
1/200
F-5
ISO 100
FL 43mm

 

[Garbz]

While I like the idea, the photo looks a bit too sureal for my tastes. Prehapse without the pol filter quite so restricting? Unless sureal is what you were going for in which case it looks great

 

[Alpha]

composition is generally good, but cut a little of the right hand side to center it.

 

[D-50]

It could definatly be centered a bit, but I love the shot, is it altered at all?it does seem surreal, also unfortunatly it is a bit out of focus, if you could go back to this same spot and get a better focus I think you would have something great on your hands.

 

[midnitejam]

composition is generally good, but cut a little of the right hand side to center it.

I ran the pic through 'Neat Image' to eradicate some of the noise. I cropped it specificaly to get the white-cap on the left 1/3 vertical and to get that cloud close to being on the right 1/3 vertical in order to apply the 'rule-of-thirds' as closely as possible.

My delima was to choose a sharp and noisy image over a softer image with less noise.

Thanks for the comments.