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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by enezdez, Dec 30, 2017.

  1. enezdez

    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Thanks For Looking Any Comments/Criticism Will Be Appreciated.

    Happy New Year To All!

    Enezdez


     
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    jcdeboever TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Love this. Man, that has B & W all over it. I converted it and it sparkles.
     
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  3. DanOstergren

    DanOstergren Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Love the lighting and composition. I think the color temperature could be much warmer though.
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    I agree that re-processing this image could help it look better. The photo as-shown, looks to me like there has been too much exposure adjustment done to the image, causing his face and his shirt's shoulder area and also his skin-tones to look, well "wrong". Re-processing the image in color, or applying a B&W conversion to the original file, could help this, quite a bit. The darks are pretty plugged up too, and the baby stroller behind him, the red part of it, draws the eye away from him a bit, and I am certain that the baby stroller's red portion will look better when it's monochromatically toned-down, so to speak. I am absolutely certain that his legs, seen against the brightly-lit backdrop pavement, will really "POP!" in B&W; that is in fact,one of the keys to this shot, the way he pops off of that background.
     
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    Yup
     
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    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Thank you all for the input, please tell me what you guys think now....And Happy New Year To All!

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    Enezdez
     
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    Nice!
     
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    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Thank you very much @jcdeboever & Happy New Year !

    Enezdez
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    Yes, a much-improved photo as a B&W. I think it could benefit from being a slight big snappier and brighter, however.
     
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    razashaikh TPF Noob!

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    B&W version looks great. Happy New Year.
     
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    Thank you all for your help/assistance!!!

    Cheers,

    Enezdez
     

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