The Blues

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Johnboy2978, Nov 23, 2004.

  1. Johnboy2978

    Johnboy2978 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    http://www.albumtown.com/showpic.php?aid=9257&pid=111593&uuid=9039

    (sorry for the link)

    Okay, I know that what I had in my mind, and what was exposed are 2 different things here.

    What I had in mind was a nice black and white with only the following visible: the keyboard, sheet music, bourbon, and cigarette smoke.

    First, I know the lighting was amiss, and I know that I didn't capture the DOF that I was going for.

    What suggestions can you offer, and what are your thoughts of the overall composition?
     
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    Algoessailing TPF Noob!

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    agree with your own critque, like the comp except the glass. looks like it's about to fall over which causes me personally a sense of anxiety in an otherwise calm setting.
     
  3. Johnboy2978

    Johnboy2978 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Okay, anyone else? What can I do to get a sharper picture and a smoother look to it?
     

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