Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by ernie, Jul 7, 2008.
what do you think? does the red tone help? subject in general?
It's OK....however, try cropping out the white double line. OM'sO
i like the just as it is nice job
The double line is fine, imo, but try rotating the picture a slight bit. Really cool shot though.
Edit: Ah, I don't think you'll be able to rotate it to get the lines straight and keep the building straight as well. Hmm..
I like the tone and the exposure....the problem here is too many lines going in different directions. I think the best shot would have been the left side with just the deli sign, the two women and the bike...probably a vertical comp.
thanks for the comments guys.
well i wanted to get the old feel (hence the postcard-tone) of a little shop on the corner where people can sit outside and drink a coffee or have a snack, kinda like satriale's in the sopranos. so i would need the whole sign and especially the people sitting down at the tables.
maybe i'll try a pano crop to get rid of the double line and the empty space above the sign.
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