The Crossroads

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  1. kilifila66

    kilifila66 TPF Noob!

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    Ok with this pic I was trying to get good symetry between the signs on the post, I wanted the angles to look totally opposite for each. I am not sure if I like my composition with the roof in the background (I can reshoot it if this angle doesn't work.) Any comments, criticisms, or critiques are totally welcome and appreciated.
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    I think with the roof, it loses some focus. A tighter shot would help this. And it seems to have a little lean to it. Nice try though, and something i would try again.
     
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    i agree with above, the roof is distracting (shorter depth of field?) and the is a lot of space either side of the post and maybe at the top aswell.

    if you do a reshoot be sure to post it :)
     

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