The Dock

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  1. kilifila66

    kilifila66 TPF Noob!

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    This is a shot from Oak Lake in Lincoln. Did a little work on it in PS (just levels and a little soft focus.) I hate the resize from photobucket so I am also including the link to DA so you can see what it SHOULD look like.
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    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24424848/

    Any comments and criticisms are welcome!
     
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    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    Hmmmm....I'm having a hard time finding a focused area....the last set of posts? I think I'd like it better if the first post was in focus. And maybe bump the contrast a bit, as well as saturation. I like dock pics though. :) :thumbup:
     
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    kilifila66 TPF Noob!

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    Yeah I have a couple where the first post is in focus, I just could'nt decide which I liked better. I added a little soft focus on it (which isn't done justice in the little version.) I will mess with another shot I have. Thanks!
     
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    On the DA version, I am pretty sure I see the second one in focus. I really like this shot...the soft tones and soft light really make it different in a nice way. :thumbup:
     
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    kilifila66 TPF Noob!

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    Ok here is a post for Core! I delved back into the vault (I know it only has like 10 pictures in it but I like to call it the vault because it sounds bigger) and messed with the other shot. Which works better?

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    http://www.deviantart.com/view/24476898/

    Theres the link for the full size.
     
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    That second one is IMO much much better - great shot. You could probably do a B&W version with a bit of grain and loads of contrast too!

    Rob
     

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