Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by PrecociousEmber, Apr 5, 2005.
i took a whole bunch of pics tonight. let me know what you think of this:
i like it, but i think i would like it even more if it werent for the painted on lines at the corners of your (i assume they are yours) eyes. i think it would provide great contrast without them too.
it doesn't really do anything for me... it looks like it belongs in your signature though...
saddly, i don't really have any comments that can improve on the picture either... the eyes are fine, but the bridge of the nose is completely blown out... the crop is so tight that there seems to be nothing remarkable to look at.
were you trying to convey a message of some sort? perhaps if you had more interesting framing... like tore a hole in a paper bag and had the same eyes looking through, etc. something to make it a little different.
thanks for the feedback
I like it, except that I think the cropping is a little too tight on the bottom. The eye is just a little too close to the edge of the frame.
interesting...I too would like to see the eye camera left be up a little from the bottom of the frame...other than that...it is supprisingly keeping my attention.
is that more of what you guys would be interested in?
well I don't like make-up here but it's nice... it'd be better without those 3 lines and maybe lower the contrast level...
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