the Fly

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  1. Sk8man

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    bzzzzzzt :lol:

    this creature just sat there and waited for me to take 8 shots :shock:

    my first go here, for your critics... hit me

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    and another question, is there a way to upload the exif info?
     
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    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    doesn't look like your server allows cross linking :( - looks like you may have to try another server.
     
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    tnx for the heads up.

    how about now?
     
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    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    kewl - I am really tired but these are cool shots! The first fly is my fav, i like how you got right down to the level of the fly - facing it headon. Its a very different perspective and works well. It looks like the fly had a wing torn off - like its done battle before and you are squaring off with it here.

    The only thing that distracts me is the stick in the background. good work :)
     
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    tnx for the review :D
     
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    I like the second one. The texture of this table or whatever it is is really nice.
     
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    it is a window still. and the scratches are there tnx to my cat :D

    she jumps on the balcony threw that window and scratches it everytime.
     
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    I like the second one myself. The composition of it is nice. Having him in the lower right hand corner causes you to get some perspective. The scratch marks lend a sense of scale.
     
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    I like the second one also. It looks like he's about to take off.
     
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    I like the second also. I like that your able to see the face of the fly, whereas the first one is a bit backlit so you get more of a sihlouette.

    Great shots.
     
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    tnx alot guys.
    i know that the second one is darker but i had to shoot fast or else the fly would fly :D
     
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    nice :p
     

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