The Grand Canyon

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by SnakeKeeper, Dec 1, 2009.

  1. SnakeKeeper

    SnakeKeeper TPF Noob!

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    Would be very grateful for any constructive criticism you may have. Looking to improve here. :)

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    Hey there Snakekeeper! You got some very nice shots in this series. My favorite of them is #3 because of how blue the sky is. Did you use a CP filter on that one? Im afraid I can't offer very much technical advice as im new to all of this but perhaps the one thing I will say is that #1 & #2 need to have the horizon straightened out a bit.

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    Thanks! No, I didn't use a CP, (That's one that's on my Christmas list ;) ) but I did increase the contrast and color saturation. :)
     
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    1) I like it alot, but maybe a bit darker
    2) I find it to be a bit boring, maybe alittle more color and fix the sky
    3) wow I am in love with this shot good work :)
    4) im not sure I like it, but I feel it needs something
    5) try this in b&W I think it would look cool
    6) wow I like it except the sky is blown
    7) more contrast and little brighter
     
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    on 1 and 2 it looks like you had a bit of a hazy day, and the sun appears to be right over head, makes for tough exposing.

    composition is also weak, learn more about that. a wider angle lens helps with landscapes.

    6 is the best one out of these, perhaps you can do more contrast on the background.
     
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    I lke #3 (the blue sky) and #6 the best.

    Most people JUST DON'T REALIZE how much difference a CPL or even an ND filters can do for shooting images with skies...
     

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