The Lovely Wife

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  1. Photoboy

    Photoboy TPF Noob!

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    We went on a "photowalk" today and I took this shot. I only adjusted the levels a little on the image and put the slight frame to it. Otherwise, it is untouched. What do you think?

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    i'm thinking change the depth of field a bit to make the background a little more blurry then your subject. this will make the model seem less flat or not at the same level as the palm trees in the background.

    i think this is accomplished by lowering your F-stop.
     
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    excellent composition and pose. the camera angle takes away some of the model's beauty. A higher camera angle would do more to flatter the model's nose.
     
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    Great advice. Excellent critique. You've offered advice on how to remedy as well as pointing out misgivings and shortcomings. Well done, bp22hot.
     

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