The old bus...(finally!!!)

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  1. Artograph

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    Well...I think we finally have the bugs worked out!! (Fingers crossed!) LOL!! Would love some comments/cc! Here she is...

    1. Bus Light

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    3. Green Tire

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    4. Bus window sill

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    #1 is nice, but there's too much vignetting for my taste, makes me feel claustrophobic.
     
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    I appreciate your comments!! Thanks! Is this better?

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    Agreed.

    I was moving my monitor around trying to make it better.
    Its not horrible, just too much for me. The others seem a bit flat, but well composed for what I think your going for there.Mabye pull the highlights down in P/P, or turn up the shadows?
    The car could be cloned out in #3 to avoid that distraction.
    Abstract is not my forte so these are just my opinions so take them as you will.
    The vig in the revised photo is still too much for me. Its something about that top right corner.Mabye the presence of shadows before adding the vig,I dont know.
     
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    Thank you!! I appreciate all your comments and suggestions! What do you mean by "flat"?? (Remember, I'm a noob....so speak slowly!! ;))

    I think the pics are too big, making them hard to "see" as well...I later figured out how to get them smaller!

    The thing about the car is...it's mine, of course...and when I realized that it was there I kinda laughed at myself, and left it there!!!! (Yeah, er...ummm....that, and I wouldn't have the foggiest on how to remove it!!!)

    Thanks agian! :wink:
     
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    What an interesting subject

    I like the idea of the window shot. I would have personally taken a wider view and gotten more windows in so you can see what it is.
     
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    here is kinda what I am talking about.
    I selected certain areas and made level adjustments to make the details kinda pop.
    I then sharpened (mabye too much) but it should give you an idea of what I was talking about.

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    Yeah....I think that works!! Thanks. :wink:
     

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