The Park

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  1. Paparazzi Paul

    Paparazzi Paul TPF Noob!

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    I just took this today.
    I like the sweeping arc of how those trees are arranged and how it directs your eye around the image.

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  2. ksmattfish

    ksmattfish Now 100% DC - not as cool as I once was, but still

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    I like all the textured color. My eyes keep falling into the space on the right edge. Maybe it's the area of bright sky. I think I'd like it better cropped or recomposed so the sweeping line of trees fills the frame from side to side.
     
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    I love a well taken treeline shot. Your composition is superb, and the contrast between the greens and the browns could not have been achieved in black and white.

    I really like it. Well done.
     
  4. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    adgee with Matt the right side needs cropping. The texture & colors are good. :thumbup: nice work
     

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