There goes the sun. C&C Wanted.

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  1. Deadlock1942

    Deadlock1942 TPF Noob!

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    Took these last night.

    Advanced critique VERY MUCH welcome.

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    Thanks for looking! :hug::
     
  2. nrois02

    nrois02 TPF Noob!

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    cool i like the second one!
     
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    ccd333 TPF Noob!

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    I like the second one too. The first one has some very nice elements.....but I would have been tempted to have a little less of that bald sky at the top. They both work well as is, though.
     
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    ocular TPF Noob!

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    Advanced criticism huh :p ? There's a spec of dust on image #1 ( far left next to poles and on cloud). I think they could do with some grain personally.
     
  5. Deadlock1942

    Deadlock1942 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the replys.

    I didn't notice the dust, thanks ocular, guess my lens needs a cleaning.
     
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    Dagwood56 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    1. I like this, but I wish there was a tad more bit of detail visible in the foreground so the water was not quite so distracting. As is, my eye keeps getting drawn right to that water instead of the sunset.

    2. :thumbup::thumbup:
     
  7. mishele

    mishele Moderator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I like 2 a lot. I like the colors and the angles in the tower make the picture very interesting.
     

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