Thirsty?

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  1. willg133

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    300d 50mm f/1.8
     
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    wow, very nice composition! The exposure is dead on, and the DoF is perfect! The only thing I don't like is that little piece of fuzz on the edge of the table to the left of the can. It bothers me. I like the B&W conversion also!

    Great job! :D

    btw... I am thirsty now... :er:
     
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    thanks for the comments...

    hm....the fuzz eh? lets see if this works better

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    not the highest quality work (more noticable on the full size) but good enough for now
     
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    Please frame it again, willg, will you?. I liked it with the frame (but like it better without the 'fuzz', too ;)). Other than that, there's little to critique about this photo. The contrasts and greys are very good. DOF is pleasing. Personally, I'd crop it more, bring out the can more and get "rid of" the person in the background (not really! Only in this photo!), for despite the blurriness it bothers me that I recognise him as a person.
     
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    Personally, if it was going to make me thirsty it would have had condensation on it, like that it looks like a warm beer - and I'm using the word beer very loosely here ;)

    Try putting it in the freezer for an hour, then let it stand for five minutes to pick up moisture, then try it again - of course thats all IMO of course.
     
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    Exellent remark, Tempra!!!!!

    Mmmmmm, beeeer...
     
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    shooting a Miller Light would make the photo much better. Just Kidding.
     
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    With an AK47, yes :mrgreen:
     

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