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  1. v4527m

    v4527m TPF Noob!

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    hey all, these are some of the pics from my rides, i am new so pls do comment on this pic, and any pointers would be great,, thanks a ton,,,,

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    Really like the last two. Fist one doesn't do much for me.
     
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    I think the first picture is the most interesting. The other two seem like a poor attempt at commercial photography -- the bikes are boring, so why are they the subject? As a viewer, I am much more interested in seeing the people with those bikes. I want to see their faces, know their stories.

    The first picture is not compositionally amazing, but there is a good sense of atmosphere, time and place.
     
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    cnutco No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like all three. Maybe the first one in b/w
     
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    I like one and two, mabe having fisherman more to the bottom right. Second one also nice shot, I also feel that bikes could have been more off to the right... just my opinion. Third shot ? I dont know... bike lookin all alone there doesnt to the background justice.
     

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