This & That [LOOK!]

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  1. twistedtwin

    twistedtwin TPF Noob!

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    These are in no order, they're just mixed together. [2010]

    Looking for:
    Criticism- what don't you like, what can I do to improve?
    Advice- how can I create better photos?

    What's here:
    A bit of everything!


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    dak1b TPF Noob!

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    wow too many pics for critique.

    try to keep it to 4-5 max

    but I like the wire spark and bee
     
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    twistedtwin TPF Noob!

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    Thanks, will do that next time! :thumbup:


    I guess I just wanted variety so that people had more choices..
    So they could pick out the best and/or worse?

    (sorry)
     
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    DaevidClarke TPF Noob!

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    did you put lipstick on your baby?
     
  5. KmH

    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    Better yet, keep it to 2 or 3 pixs.

    :thumbdown:
     
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    supraman215 TPF Noob!

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    Overall you have a lot of exposure and focus problems. Only about every third photo follows the rule of thirds weird. So watch your composition. Post your 3 BEST pics.
     
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    page_tyson TPF Noob!

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    I really like the concepts and editing of most of your pictures. The composition for the most part is really good. Like was said above, take some more time before you shoot and make sure you get your subject in focus. This will dramatically improve these pictures (if you have to, use a tripod). For people, make sure you focus on the eyes.
     
  8. Josh66

    Josh66 Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Where do you live?

    One had a tent thing that says Greenville, one is the Dallas skyline, one is a TX flag looking thing.

    I think you live pretty close to me, lol.

    Where was that heart one taken?
     
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    eric-holmes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    and blush and blue contacts...
     
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    twistedtwin TPF Noob!

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    No, I did not.
    I did brighten his blue eyes tough.
     
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    twistedtwin TPF Noob!

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    I took those while I was out of town.
     
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    taraj_00 TPF Noob!

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    I think the exposure is off on the first two... I would think some fill light would help bring out dad's face under the cap, without having to blow any parts out.

    I LOVE the sparkler! I might have to let my son play some more tomorrow and try one of those.
     

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