Thoughts on this portrait idea?

[mal]

I took this photo whilst waiting for a bus with my friend the other day. I didn't have a tripod with me, so the image isn't quite sharp enough, but I was wondering if you guys think it's worth taking the idea further and going back for a reshoot when I'm better equipped?

Tim Toase

 

[Conk]

I'm not sure what you werew trying to achive here. The person in the photo looks cut and pasted. Can you explain some detail about the image and what you have done?

 

[Rob]

I'm a bit lost... what's he holding? why? Nice soft light, but you can't really see him.