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    Any tips to make this shot better or does anyone see problems with it that im missing.All opinions would be helpful thanks.

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    Over saturated....OM'sO
     
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    Personally, I like the over saturation on an image this simple. I would crop out the black piece on the left, it's a little distracting and overall the gate is too centered for me. Also, it may just be my screen but there seems to be a halo around the gate.
     
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    I can see a slight blue halo round the gate, and between the branches of the trees too. but i had to look for it..

    personally, i would have took one big step to the left befor etaking this photo, i would have kept the gate centred, just a step to the left so that you could read th wording on the gate a bit more clearly, even though it only looks like a date, its still not very clear on this photo. and obvioulsy, its a focal point on the gate itself.
     
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    I took one focusing more on the centre of the gate but didn't like myself.


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