three more 4 C&C

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  1. hopdaddy

    hopdaddy No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Tried the kiss method on this one[Keep it simple stupid] but is it too simple?[​IMG]

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    Same turtle different composition
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    3 The great outdoors
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    Please c&c ........and thankyou in advance
     
  2. Bitter Jeweler

    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    The background in #1 kills it. Far too busy for a "simple" subject.
     
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    hopdaddy No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Thanks for your incite Bitter,your opinions are appreciated and respected.
    I wouldn't have caught that.:grumpy:


    would any of the shots have been accepted by a stock co.??
     
  4. TiCoyote

    TiCoyote TPF Noob!

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    #1 There is not enough contrast between the subject and the background. If the background were darker it would pop more.

    #2 I like the turtle, and I like where you've placed the red eye. Still, I'd rather see the head in the middle, or the entire turtle.

    #3
    I'd like to see a bigger version of this, but my first reaction is that the frame is just too busy. Try a lower angle so water fills more of the frame.
     
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    hopdaddy No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    thank you for your input
     

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