Three pics, C&C Please

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  1. realitycheck3907

    realitycheck3907 TPF Noob!

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    Hey guys these are two pics I got today. I tried to pay better attention to what all you guys have been giving me. So this time please pour on the harsh critique. I want to get better at this so its time for you guys to let me have it. ;)
    Thanks guys, Chet

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    Edit: I got rid of the third pic, cause it was a dud.
     
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    2 and 3 kind of bore me.. 1 could be improved though.. the river looks great.. but if it was my pic, I would be making those colors pop out more... especially the greens
     
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    I would say that 1 and 3 bore me, but I really like two - I like the simplicity of the colours and shapes, good job!
     
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    Awesome thanks for the feedback guys. Anyone else?
     
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    i'm on the same boat as chris.
     
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    Thanks D. Anyone else?
     
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    You know I always love pictures taken straight up into trees that are illuminated by the sun, but they seem to bore the heck out of everyone. I was thinking about it on the way home today as I saw a very pretty tree just kind of wafting in the breeze.

    Dunno.

    I, for one, like 2 very much.
     
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    #1's a lovely little shot but could do with being slightly warmer IMO.

    There's nothing boring about #2 for my money, it doesn't immediately grab the eye I grant you but if you look at it the composition very subtly draws you in. This is my favourite.

    #3? Meh! Not you best work dude. Lacks sharpness, contrast and if I'm entirely honest interest. I'm slightly surprised at you posting it.
     
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    Thanks for the help guys thats what I wanted to hear, straight honest opinions. I'm glad some of you really like number two. I was walking along the path and saw those big leaves then got under the tree and looked up and was like wow, thats so pretty. I was scared I missed it though when I took the picture.
    I'll get rid of number three, and make it two pics. HEHE

    I also added a warming filter and some contrast to number 1
     
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