Three shots of a sailing boat

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  1. vesko

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    The colours where not great, so I desided to go b&w with a bit of tint:

    1. Binda is comming home.

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    2. Boat and the city

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    3. Home at last

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    What do you think and how can I fix the sky?

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  2. PNA

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    I know it's not good, but something to think about....





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  3. vesko

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    I'll try that.
     
  4. Lorielle99

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    i like these alot. and i like the framing in #1, but i would have used less branches, they are sort of distracting
     
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    2nd picture is nice. the boat and the buildings are on point.
     
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    I love #1.
     
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    The braches are great! I really like how the one reaches right into the middle of the frame. The horizon was the distracting part for me - it slopes down to the left a little. Straighten that .... the tone of the branches rocks. Really sets off the white and grey of the rest of the shot.

    pun intended?
     
  8. vesko

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    I followed the advice of PNA, also decided to go back to colour on the first one. Gone too far with the tint, I think.
    Thanks again!

    1. Binda is comming home.





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    2. Boat and the city.

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    3. Home at last!

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    I like #1 as originally posted better. The tinting works totether with the brackes and the blown out clouds.
     

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