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Discussion in 'Commercial/Product photography' started by Christie Photo, Mar 26, 2007.

  1. Christie Photo

    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I shot this today for use in a company brochure. The hand was used for scale.

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    I left plenty of room, as I'm sure it will be cropped much tighter.

    Pete
     
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    critique removed by poster.

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    Please do not post edits of other member's photos without their permission. (edited by Chase)
     
  3. Christie Photo

    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Traveler... delete MY image from your post.
     
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    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    Perhaps you might turn on the option in your profile that says 'my pictures are not OK to edit.'
     
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    I like how this is set up :) The product itself is obviously the focus, but I think a bit of illumination on the bullet points would work too...as they are they're a bit hard to read (but then again...my eyes are getting old ;))

    Cheers!
     
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    Maybe a little more DOF would make the bullet points easier to read? I like the composition, though.
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Thanks! I'm told that I may not have been shallow enough for thier tastes. They may blur it a bit.
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    This is how the project ended... FINALLY!

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    Looks good to me... One of the things I was surprised by was on another forum I suggested someone add something like a dollar bill to show scale and they were shocked. The idea that an illustrative image needed a scale was a brand new concept to some of them.

    the pencil worked as well as the hand.
     
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    nice job
     

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