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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by alya, Jun 28, 2008.

  1. alya

    alya TPF Noob!

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    hi every body this is my first Thread ^^

    and i hope all of u like my work and edit...


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    your opinion is important to me...

     
  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Welcome Alya, and greetings from just down the road in Jebel Ali (for a few more days anyway). A very nice first offering - I like the composition but suggest it's probably about one stop over exposed and slightly lacking in contrast; both easily remedied in your favorite photo editing application.

    Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

    ~John
     
  3. 93rdcurrent

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    I agree it does seem to be just a tad overexposed. If you have ps cs3 or whatever I would try going into Exposure and adjusting the Gamma Correction. You also might drop the Offset by -.00020. You could then go into the Contrast/Brightness and boost the contrast a little. Just a few suggestions but I like the concept and the subject quite a bit. It just seems a little blown out. Keep 'em coming.
     
  4. Chris of Arabia

    Chris of Arabia Herding cats since 1988... Supporting Member

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    A little over-exposed I'd say yes, but I'd reserve judgement on the contrast until the exposure is fixed. I think it'll look fine with around a 1 stop adjustment
     
  5. IanRB

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    I'm not going to say anything about over exposure because by now you probably know it is. I like the composition, the subject is interesting and it has emotion. Keep it up, i would like to see more photos from you soon. Keep posting!
     
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    I think the photo is very sharp! And the look on the man's face makes the photo very intriguing.

    I think the brightness conveys of how I think of Dubai (that is where the photo was taken?); it really helps you think there is a blazing, bright, and hot sun in the sky. But other people said its too bright, and since I am only a beginner I would do what they say to make the photo more appealing.

    Thank you for posting on here. I really enjoyed looking at your photo! And please post more!
     
  7. alya

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    thanks all^^

    i hope u like all my new photo...

    i will take your opinion and do it...


    thanks agin...
     

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