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  1. Artemis

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    Pic of my dog, this one is really rubbish but only one i have small enough to display, im having trouble making my images small...:(

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    Oki this one was alot nicer cause it had all the image but i messed with it to make it smaller :(.

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    And last but not least :)

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    first one is ok, the cropping could be worked on more
    the second one is out of focus and is FULL of hot spots, trash it.

    keeeep posting!
     
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    The second one was my fav, maybe when u see it with all the other stuff...
    Full of hot spots? isnt that good?
     
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    These both look slightly overexposed on my monitor. And my crappy work monitor usually darkens things badly. The first one is not as bad as the second one, though; it has major hot spots in several areas.

    Great shot of the dog, though.....I love it when they naturally "strike a pose" like that! :D
     
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    My dog has a nack of that, dunno how she just loves the camera, and will wait ages for her photo to be taken :)
     
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    What yah think of the cloud image?
     
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    I don't like the cloud image, it's way too photoshopped and doesn't do a thing for me, it looks like one of those prayer cards. sorry. Maybe darken it and add a touch more contrast.
    but hot spots are over-exposed areas that are a lot brighter than other portions of the picture.
     
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    ahh, refresh and go to the top, i edited my top pic.
    Heres another pic, i just found this lille piece of gold, hope you like.

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    it's an ok image, the composition is dull but I like the fingers of light. the colours are muddy, but it might be my screen. that one tree that pokes up straight in the middle is really distracting.
     
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    Hehe you have a very good point, thats like the best im doing at the mo, im hopping to get alot better :)
     
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    perfect! take more pictures! tape the camera to your wrist if you have to!
    when I'm not at work I have my camera. heh
     
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    :D:D Thats what i hope to do hehe.
    I got my exams, then i go on holiday and ill have my SLR cause its my b-day soon.
    Im gonna get work experience later taking photos.
    Then im gonna do photography at College :D
     

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