Tonights Sunset

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    GerryDavid No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    http://www.pbase.com/gerrydavid/image/34101988
    1/125s f/2.8 at 18.6mm iso100 with Flash

    I covered a few highlights up with the healing tool, I decided to leave the one light there since the light was also in the water, but now that I got it up, it doesnt look to great at 800 pixels, it looked better in the 3.2mp zoomed in, hmm.

    No levels used. And incase your wondering why I used flash when there was no objects near me, it gives me a different color ballance in camera so I try it sometimes.
     
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    very nice.. but i'd like to see it in full colours...
     
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    I like it - alot.
     
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    Not sure, maybe it is the lighting, but where is your focus for this shot. Is it the horizon because the water tower looks blurred. Just a question tho, not a crit...i am curious.
     
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    The focus was the water tower, in the thumbnail it looks out of focus, in the larger version, its in more focus but still looks a bit off. It looks sharp in the original file, must just be the resizing down, I did it in one step.
     
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    I just cleaned up my pbase a bit, so I had to redo the link to this picture. I removed that other light. But im not sure if its better with or with out. On another forum someone mentioned thath it gave the pic a bit of "civilization" look to it, like people are there. I think it was a bit to slight for that. I would have to make it look bigger.
     

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