Tonya 2

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by NoelNTexas, Mar 27, 2007.

  1. NoelNTexas

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    I hated this shot but she loved it so I though I would post it on here and see what you all think of it.

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    i really like it!! She really stands out, and is absolutely gorgeous! however, my only criticism - slap me if im wrong, but i would slightly dull down the light/fountain to the left of the picture as is is slightly overpowering, apart from that - spot on! :)
     
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    Even if she loves it, could she live with 1)cropping to a portrait aspect ratio to get rid of fountains to the right.
    2) Then masking her figure to a top layer and doing a makeover to brighter her up some?
     
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    I like the overall idea. I'd like to see another attempt though.
     
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    I really like the idea. If she was a little brighter and possibly in portrait mode, id have to see it first to tell you.
     
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    Wow I just now saw this one! I love it.
     
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    it is nice in a way, but to me the skin tone is way off ... looks very unhealthy grey-greenish.
     
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    Any better?

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    I like the top one alot
     
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    I like your first attempt. Their is something I liked about it, besides your attractive subject, but I can't place it.

    It has to do with how I like the way she is in the immediate foreground, then trees and fountains in the middle, then building in the background but then nothing. No mountains off in the distance, no horizon, just sky.

    But also it has to do with the coloring. I like it. The graininess along with the coloring reminds me of the look in the movie 300 and I liked that.
     
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    WOW! All of the shots look great. I really like the 2nd and 3rd shots, but the 1st is also very good. Thanks for sharing with us.
     

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